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Post by thewave on Sept 10, 2009 11:18:20 GMT -5
Why does it have to be a horrible one?
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Post by Tails82 on Sept 10, 2009 11:19:33 GMT -5
You guys are so mean!
*runs off*
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:21:57 GMT -5
It wasn't meant to be an insult but okay...
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Post by Tails82 on Sept 10, 2009 11:25:21 GMT -5
Maybe you should try horrible fan fiction instead. Now, this is a story all about how My life got flipped-turned upside down And I'd like to take a minute Just sit right there I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town called Bel Air In west Philadelphia born and raised On the playground was where I spent most of my days Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool And all shootin some b-ball outside of the school When a couple of guys Who were up to no good Startin making trouble in my neighborhood I got in one little fight and my mom got scared And said 'You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air' I begged and pleaded with her day after day But she packed my suitcase and sent me on my way She gave me a kiss and then she gave me my ticket. I put my walkman on and said, 'I might as well kick it'. First class, yo this is bad Drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass. Is this what the people of Bel-Air Living like? Hmmmmm this might be alright. But wait I hear there're prissy, bourgeois and all that Is this the type of place that they should send this cool cat? I don't think so I'll see when I get there I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air Well, the plane landed and when I came out There was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out I ain't trying to get arrested yet I just got here I sprang with the quickness like lightning, disappeared I whistled for a cab and when it came near The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror If anything I can say that this cab was rare But I thought 'Nah forget it' - 'Yo homes to Bel Air' I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8 And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later' I looked at my kingdom I was finally there To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air |
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Post by Tails82 on Sept 10, 2009 11:25:52 GMT -5
Nothing can beat that, so why try?
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:30:05 GMT -5
That's not fan fiction at all! It's not even literature!
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:33:25 GMT -5
This is what I'm getting at...
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Suddenly, she felt a pain in her left arm.
“Don’t worry...this shouldn’t hurt...too much.”
She then started feeling strange...and finally broke out into a scream. Her skin felt ice cold...she felt like she was shrinking...everything was shrinking on her body. She felt her bones grinding inside of her, and her toes and fingers being sucked back into her hand. She felt her ears growing longer and rising to the top of her head, and something else coming out of it as well. She felt her eyes changing, and soon everything was blurry...she felt her nose and mouth being pushed out to form a subtle muzzle, and finally she felt her spine lengthening...until...RIP...a thin but wide tail emerged from her bottom...though was it really the bottom of her body anymore?
Shauna fainted.
Eventually, she woke up...she looked around; she appeared to be in some kind of cage, and there was something blocking the bottom of her vision...she tried to stand up, but it felt like her legs had no strength; she fell back onto her arms...and it felt...natural. She started freaking out, and decided screaming...all she heard was “GLAAA!” She looked at her hands...but you probably wouldn’t call them that anymore...they were pink paws...her entire body was covered with pink fur...She then realized that what was blocking her sight was actually her mouth and nose, now forming a muzzle. She felt flat things hanging from the side of her head. As she became even more worried, her tail was wagging faster. TAIL!? She was crying now...her tears felt different now that she was entirely covered with fur. I’m going to need to get used to that...she thought, because I’m going to be crying a lot... She couldn’t believe it...she was an Espeon now...she was stripped of her humanity...what about Chris? What would he say?...
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Post by thewave on Sept 10, 2009 11:43:31 GMT -5
You guys are so mean! *runs off* So are you. Don't mock me and don't be mean about Espeon. It wasn't meant to be an insult but okay... But I still don't understand why I should try horrible fan fictions.... Maybe you should try horrible fan fiction instead. Now, this is a story all about how My life got flipped-turned upside down I only read those lines and I knew it was Bell-Air. This is what I'm getting at... --- Suddenly, she felt a pain in her left arm. “Don’t worry...this shouldn’t hurt...too much.” She then started feeling strange...and finally broke out into a scream. Her skin felt ice cold...she felt like she was shrinking...everything was shrinking on her body. She felt her bones grinding inside of her, and her toes and fingers being sucked back into her hand. She felt her ears growing longer and rising to the top of her head, and something else coming out of it as well. She felt her eyes changing, and soon everything was blurry...she felt her nose and mouth being pushed out to form a subtle muzzle, and finally she felt her spine lengthening...until...RIP...a thin but wide tail emerged from her bottom...though was it really the bottom of her body anymore? Shauna fainted. Eventually, she woke up...she looked around; she appeared to be in some kind of cage, and there was something blocking the bottom of her vision...she tried to stand up, but it felt like her legs had no strength; she fell back onto her arms...and it felt...natural. She started freaking out, and decided screaming...all she heard was “GLAAA!” She looked at her hands...but you probably wouldn’t call them that anymore...they were pink paws...her entire body was covered with pink fur...She then realized that what was blocking her sight was actually her mouth and nose, now forming a muzzle. She felt flat things hanging from the side of her head. As she became even more worried, her tail was wagging faster. TAIL!? She was crying now...her tears felt different now that she was entirely covered with fur. I’m going to need to get used to that...she thought, because I’m going to be crying a lot... She couldn’t believe it...she was an Espeon now...she was stripped of her humanity...what about Chris? What would he say?... Oh, so you're saying I should make a fan fiction? Sorry, but I'm really not creative, so I'm not going to make one. Also, that's a kinda creepy story. o.o' |
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:43:55 GMT -5
What, did that scare everyone off? Don't worry, it can't hurt you here!
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:45:31 GMT -5
Strictly speaking I was talking to Tails. But come on, anyone can write fan fiction... Not like you have anything to lose. You can write in whatever you want...
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:45:50 GMT -5
nudgenudgewinkwink
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:48:31 GMT -5
Here's another thing, WHY IS EVERYONE FROM THE ORIGINAL TOPIC A MOD BUT ME!?
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Post by thewave on Sept 10, 2009 11:49:10 GMT -5
Oh, I see. I guess I'm that dumb that I don't know who is talking to who.
Also, I tell you, if I write a fan fiction, you would fall asleep in the first paragraph.
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Post by thewave on Sept 10, 2009 11:49:52 GMT -5
Here's another thing, WHY IS EVERYONE FROM THE ORIGINAL TOPIC A MOD BUT ME!? Umm what? Laharl and I are the only mods here! ._.' |
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Post by Chromeo on Sept 10, 2009 11:51:23 GMT -5
Well, I guess you don't have to write a fan-fiction... If yer Chicken!
And don't be so hard on yourself, geez.
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